literature

Alive

Deviation Actions

SaifGuard's avatar
By
Published:
218 Views

Literature Text

You are alive
Sweat drips off your forehead
everything around you is lost
you're dedicated to this one task
you feel victory is within grasp
almost there, you can taste it, already imagining conquest
shatter, break, tear, explode, lost yet again
you get up again, but the pain brings you back down
you close your eyes, silently cursing the world's workings
and slowly fade down into hands that bring a silent hush over the scene
you fall through holes only to land feet first for the next dreaded challenge
you are alive.
Sounds same as a previous submission. I just decided to tweak a few things to make it more hopeful based on a friends judgment. I’m satisfied with final results.
© 2010 - 2024 SaifGuard
Comments0
Comments have been disabled for this deviation